Very very nice work
I played the first Mardek when it originally came out and I had been waiting for this ever since. I was not disappointed. I really thoroughly enjoyed this game and can say without a doubt that it gave me more play time than anything else I've ever played on Newgrounds or anywhere else (and that's a good deal of content). Where else can I play 9 hours worth of material for free? I couldn't tell you.
This game's length makes it difficult to review fully. First of all, I found everything fairly glitch free once I updated my flash player, except signs repeated themselves fairly regularly when reading them, as I believe others have pointed out. Seeing a rat level up in the sewers was funny, but also a logical addition. Many choices in your game were logical, along with snippets of speech which make fun of traditional rpg's (like the random battles on the ship). A true satire. Also, I'd say the difficulty was really very good. I had to replay a bunch of fights, but not to the point where it was annoying and most of the time there was something I was doing wrong/missing. Like for the shaman boss I didn't have barrier breaker which is an absolute necessity. The reaction system worked very well and I really liked the variations in attacks and status effects etc. The items worked well too; I liked getting new skills from gear and side quests. Every time I found a new item in a chest or lying around I felt like it was something special and it gave me a little sense of pride which is always good to have in a game. I really liked the continuity from the first game; it managed to fit together nicely if you had played the first one, while also being an engaging storyline to those who hadn't.
I have a few minor complaints, not that they really detracted from the overall experience which was incredible. As others have said, the catacombs got to be very tedious. All of my characters ran out of mana completely (except Deugan of course) and I just had to flee from all the battles. Fleeing was a fairly consistent problem; the game had no mechanism to discourage it. Assuming that you are powerful enough already, the fights are fairly pointless. Maybe a percent chance to fail, or a chance of them reappearing without the flee option could work. I'm sure you've thought this through though and you are the designer so I support your decision. Also, I personally found the difficulty to be a little unevenly distributed, with the beginning being more difficult than the end (much of this may be due to my unsuccessful fights against the shaman, though). Also, the characters were really unevenly skilled. The caster (I'm kicking myself for not remembering her name) was really infinitely better because of element variation than other characters, most notably Deugan. Of course he's good for barrier breaking, but beyond that...eh. More monster drops could have been nice as well, as the only thing they really drop that you can't buy is the mace from the skeletons, which was a nice touch. My biggest complaint (though not really a PROBLEM) is Deugan. NOOOO!!! *Spoiler* But I really feel like I could have saved him in 10 minutes. That was the most emotional moment of any game I've played in a long, long time. Another emotional highlight (not a problem at all it just came to mind) was when the books in the Goznor shop talked about dominance in relationships. I became jealous when I found out that dominant elements won women, implying (maybe?) that the girl (sorry I don't know her name *embarrased*) would love Deugan over me because of his elemental dominance. I don't want Mardek to lose her!
Once again, really really nice work. I must say I'm baffled as to why this piece did not receive front page status. It deserves it more than I can possibly express in words, and I'm really sorry that so many people will not find out about this game! On another note, I like to see that you're still responding to comments almost 200 in and I would love to hear anything back. I also love your artwork; some of it is amazing. I just ran out of characters for the first time!!!